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Jan 14, 2009 19:32:59 GMT
Post by Anarki on Jan 14, 2009 19:32:59 GMT
Whilst looking in your eyes I knew, That living meant, to die with you, To laugh with you, to cry with you, To share that ‘one’ mince pie with you, To draw with you, to write with you, To have that pillow fight with you, To hear with you, to see with you, To brave that ‘killer’ bee with you, To eat with you, to drink with you, To think ‘I think what you think’ with you, To duck with you, to dive with you, To watch films on a hard drive with you, To pray with you, to preach with you, To sit on a white beach with you, To rest with you, to run with you, To go from ‘honey bun’ to ‘where’s the machine gun?’ with you, To create with you, to destroy with you, To know a traveller’s joy with you, To end with you, to begin with you, To take it on the chin with you, To fail with you, to succeed with you, Who cares, as long as I can be with you.
- Sumit I threw together last night, hope you like it! Comments appreciated... Anarki
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Jan 14, 2009 22:33:38 GMT
Post by DeeKay on Jan 14, 2009 22:33:38 GMT
Very nice. I like the little touches like the mince pie and watching films on a hard drive, gives it that sense of realism!
In fact, I really like it, I really think the little touches make it great, I mean they're experiences that's anyone who's been in a relationship can relate to. Gives it that warmth and makes it easy to relate to.
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lost
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Jan 15, 2009 18:15:32 GMT
Post by lost on Jan 15, 2009 18:15:32 GMT
I really really like this. It's the kind of thing most girls would want to here from most guys! I agree with Deekay, the little "mince pie" touches are great and make it really real.
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Jan 21, 2009 21:02:24 GMT
Post by iqamah on Jan 21, 2009 21:02:24 GMT
mince pie LOL
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